They hit and run
It's all homerun
Other teams get frustrated
They feel defeated
So fun to watch the game
cause' Wyverns always win the game
Wyverns has good teamwork
While other teams have hard work
Their bunt hits are awesome
You definitely need to see some
They run and slide, the base is saven
Your mouth will be wide open
They're also all good looking
That's one of the reason me liking
If they ever quit baseball
I will complain forever to all
My favorite pitcher, Kim Kwang Hyun
My favorite pitcher, Ko Hyo Jun
My favorite batter, Jung Keun Woo
My favorite batter, Park Jeong Kwon
My favorite batter, Park Jin Man
Hayoung,
답글삭제Great poem for your beloved Wyverns! As an ode though, you were missing the personification and expression of hyperbolic admiration. I appreaciate that you showed effort in making your words rhyme -- that's a challenge for some people. Overall, it was an okay poem. I do, however, enocurage more creative and original thinking. The last stanza was a rehash of an ode I had shown in class.